murdered E55 for sale
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2 weeks ago I would have went and test drove it. I drove farther than that for mine. Not sure it could pass for a family car
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13' E350 4matic, 08' E63
Suggestions: You list out things nicely in the add. I am sure you want to highlight the additions. For someone who does not know about AMG models, it sounds as though you added a supercharger, and added air ride to it. So someone reading it thinks the car is heavily changed and customized (so you lessen the market).
E55 AMG V8 Kompressor (supercharger) that would solve the unknowing ,
then put - with Factory air ride (I would leave this out, its factory and a person looking for one already knows that, someone who is not aware of it doesn't sell them on that part) , updated Nav unit etc......
Then go into the Kleeman upgrades you have done. Also list how those upgrades were done, i.e..... Done at Kleeman or name the reputable installer.
Then list that you have all documents on the vehicle for viewing (not just the spreadsheet). Or spell that out.
Cars.com but highlight why you are asking what you are asking. Seems like a fair price for what it is. Highlight that the vehicle is immaculate and ALL Maintenance is up to date and documented. Most vehicles out there won't have that at all, and will that will help immensely. Wording and pictures will sell it quick. Take a day and find a unique place for pics. That warehouse with the overhead fluorescents is not bad, just light it up at night and take a hundred pics and use the ones you want. HINT: Remember having the front wheels turned 20 degrees pending the angle of your pic helps to bring the picture together better on cars. Cannot remember why but it does a lot. There is an art to it. Here is a link of the best add I have ever seen done, shared this with another member too.
http://karlfranz.com/vantage4sale/
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Sad to see you getting out of it. Good job on getting the Paint Correction done, that will help you immensely with the condition.
Suggestions: You list out things nicely in the add. I am sure you want to highlight the additions. For someone who does not know about AMG models, it sounds as though you added a supercharger, and added air ride to it. So someone reading it thinks the car is heavily changed and customized (so you lessen the market).
E55 AMG V8 Kompressor (supercharger) that would solve the unknowing ,
then put - with Factory air ride (I would leave this out, its factory and a person looking for one already knows that, someone who is not aware of it doesn't sell them on that part) , updated Nav unit etc......
Then go into the Kleeman upgrades you have done. Also list how those upgrades were done, i.e..... Done at Kleeman or name the reputable installer.
Then list that you have all documents on the vehicle for viewing (not just the spreadsheet). Or spell that out.
Cars.com but highlight why you are asking what you are asking. Seems like a fair price for what it is. Highlight that the vehicle is immaculate and ALL Maintenance is up to date and documented. Most vehicles out there won't have that at all, and will that will help immensely. Wording and pictures will sell it quick. Take a day and find a unique place for pics. That warehouse with the overhead fluorescents is not bad, just light it up at night and take a hundred pics and use the ones you want. HINT: Remember having the front wheels turned 20 degrees pending the angle of your pic helps to bring the picture together better on cars. Cannot remember why but it does a lot. There is an art to it. Here is a link of the best add I have ever seen done, shared this with another member too.
http://karlfranz.com/vantage4sale/
Suggestions: You list out things nicely in the add. I am sure you want to highlight the additions. For someone who does not know about AMG models, it sounds as though you added a supercharger, and added air ride to it. So someone reading it thinks the car is heavily changed and customized (so you lessen the market).
E55 AMG V8 Kompressor (supercharger) that would solve the unknowing ,
then put - with Factory air ride (I would leave this out, its factory and a person looking for one already knows that, someone who is not aware of it doesn't sell them on that part) , updated Nav unit etc......
Then go into the Kleeman upgrades you have done. Also list how those upgrades were done, i.e..... Done at Kleeman or name the reputable installer.
Then list that you have all documents on the vehicle for viewing (not just the spreadsheet). Or spell that out.
Cars.com but highlight why you are asking what you are asking. Seems like a fair price for what it is. Highlight that the vehicle is immaculate and ALL Maintenance is up to date and documented. Most vehicles out there won't have that at all, and will that will help immensely. Wording and pictures will sell it quick. Take a day and find a unique place for pics. That warehouse with the overhead fluorescents is not bad, just light it up at night and take a hundred pics and use the ones you want. HINT: Remember having the front wheels turned 20 degrees pending the angle of your pic helps to bring the picture together better on cars. Cannot remember why but it does a lot. There is an art to it. Here is a link of the best add I have ever seen done, shared this with another member too.
http://karlfranz.com/vantage4sale/
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A few minor quibbles with the original ad:
Stop saying "aprox" (approx).... Like aprox 700HP or aprox $105,000. Figure out the number that is correct and use it. Saying "approx" makes it sound like you are either guessing or overstating the numbers.
I'd also reword the "over $23g worth of stuff" comment. "Stuff" doesn't cost $23 grand..... Enumerate what those parts are, and again give a specific price for the mods. Avoid being vague about the values....because it makes it seem like you are inflating the value of your work.
I agree that the photos are distracting with a boat and warehouse as your background. Try to find a location to photograph where "the car is the star"... And get natural lighting on it, the fluorescent lights are not as flattering as some sunset-type photos would be.
GLWS!
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Stop saying "aprox" (approx).... Like aprox 700HP or aprox $105,000. Figure out the number that is correct and use it. Saying "approx" makes it sound like you are either guessing or overstating the numbers.
I'd also reword the "over $23g worth of stuff" comment. "Stuff" doesn't cost $23 grand..... Enumerate what those parts are, and again give a specific price for the mods. Avoid being vague about the values....because it makes it seem like you are inflating the value of your work.
I agree that the photos are distracting with a boat and warehouse as your background. Try to find a location to photograph where "the car is the star"... And get natural lighting on it, the fluorescent lights are not as flattering as some sunset-type photos would be.
GLWS!
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I don't think it's a good deal since it's 03 and not very well equipped.
Plus, 125K miles.... for $18K is over priced. Stock car worth no more than $13K today. Mods don't count much.
Plus, 125K miles.... for $18K is over priced. Stock car worth no more than $13K today. Mods don't count much.
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If your looking for a modded car the that extent it's a great deal. If your looking for a family type car you would think its a little high for the miles.
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I don't think my car worth more than $19K today market. My is fully equipped, KeylessGo, Pano, DynamicSeat, Cool/Heat Seat, parking sensors... with much less mileage and 2006 instead of 2003. Plus, the add shows 700hp/800toruq without any prove. Just my opinion, with the year and mileage this car worth around $14K.
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Also think it's overpriced but the paint does look dam good. Those power numbers are pretty optimistic, seems like someone is taking the kleeman package numbers off the site.
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E55, GLS450, GL63, GLE350
Anytime I see huge hp numbers and no dyno chart I call BS! Yeah, I agree with the comment about the AMG logo on the ashtray cover. Looks horrible. $12k to $13k with the mileage and age.
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Where are the pics of the engine? Wouldnt you think someone would want to show the monster that is making all those number?
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